Ok. So I know this is crap, and the voices don't sound very much like the characters and I could do so much better. But I've been ill and running a fever for almost a week so meh. I'm warming up for my River/Badger fic anyway :)
Also, I know I change tenses halfway through. It's deliberate for effect. I play with tenses a lot :)
Also also,
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